Some poetic particles….
By Lorre
One question….
Will you be able to love me as I love you?
One question….
Will I be able to love you as much as I want to?
One statement….
If these questions can be answered, the relationship is over analyzed
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Life is a meal
At this point, I don’t like what I’m eating
Did my order get mixed up with someone else’s
I’d like to see a menu
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I’m bewildered and I don’t know where I am
I’m embarrassed, as if I must make excuses
Just for when there are no rave reviews
Even in small flashes, great stuff!!!
(Yes, it’s a rave review.)
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Yeah!
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Lorre, these are pretty heavy…and cool.. continue…
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I shall and thank you.
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Yeah, my life’s order got messed up, too.
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There are some really bad waitstaff out there. But who to complain to?
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If I figure that out I’ll let you know.
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Ok. seriously you need to laugh http://breakitdownpete.wordpress.com/2012/04/22/appropriate-yet-inappropriate-photos/
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Great post and I added my take since I was called out.
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Love your comments! You are tooooooo cool! he’s a very lucky man!
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I know right!!!??!!!
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Lorre, I really like your poetry. Glimpses of life. Powerful and Excellent!
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Thanks. I appreciate the comment since it was so kind.
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I love the tidbits. Flash fiction, but better.
Red.
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Flash? How did you know I wrote these naked?
Ha, ha………..
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“Life is a meal
At this point, I don’t like what I’m eating
Did my order get mixed up with someone else’s
I’d like to see a menu” …
For awhile now I have been searching for the right way to say what I feel…you nailed it. I will be quoting you often!
Brilliant work
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Awesome!
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Well I always like a flash of something,
hey I meant with the poetry… Cheeky 😉 lol
Have a fun day today Lorre and keep adding
your poems, you’re just getting too good at this 🙂
Androgoth XXx
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Thanks. They almost seem the easy way out since I’ve gotten lazy with the sarcastic, in your face type of posts. Ahhh…..another day perhpas.
Have a great day yourself.
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