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Trapped In a Jungle (baggage from other blog)

16 Apr

Trapped in a jungle

Perfumed with pain

I can taste the seduction

Suffocating my brain

Only the wicked survive

Without heartily scars

Don’t bother with rules

You won’t get very far

The fee is your soul

For your heart cannot play

This game’s for the cunning

Love only gets in the way

Once ecstasy bits

You’ll surely agree

Committment doesn’t count

Hearts break too easily

Trapped in a jungle

There is no escape

My conscience is gone

My soul has been raped

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8 Responses to “Trapped In a Jungle (baggage from other blog)”

  1. El Guapo April 16, 2012 at 1:29 PM #

    Wow – that’s really strong.
    What inspired it?

    • Lorre April 16, 2012 at 2:15 PM #

      Just a run of interesting people that made quite the impact….not always good.

  2. silentlyheardonce April 16, 2012 at 1:32 PM #

    Great writing. Words seem to flow off the paper.

    • Lorre April 16, 2012 at 2:16 PM #

      Thanks. I appreciate the comment.

  3. The Hook April 19, 2012 at 8:52 AM #

    Powerful, raw and honest.
    Nicely done.

  4. Red April 22, 2012 at 3:53 PM #

    The twist at the end makes me feel like the rules are finally learned and the game winnable. Shame the registration was so expensive.
    Red.

    • Lorre April 22, 2012 at 8:07 PM #

      …and I never get the damn warranty

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