Weekly Photo Challenge: Hope with Haiku Sunday (shaken, not stirred)

29 Jan

She said “Clean your room”

Two weeks, I didn’t believe

Mom sure kept her word

She hopes I clean it

I hope to get my bed back

Hope won’t get it done

Time to get cracking

The couch, not comfortable

Hope springs eternal

Bye Bye Bed!

To anyone who thinks her room looks good or I was harsh: This was done after I cleared it out a few weeks ago. Everything on her floor, on her desk and scattered on her dressers was moved to the guest room. She never bothered to clean up those belongings and managed to create more of a mess in her room. Over it! She was warned….she just didn’t believe me.

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35 Responses to “Weekly Photo Challenge: Hope with Haiku Sunday (shaken, not stirred)”

  1. latebloomerbuds January 29, 2012 at 5:43 PM #

    Tuff love and all summed up in haiku! What now? Margie

    • lorrelee1970 January 29, 2012 at 5:45 PM #

      I don’t know. I could set myself on fire and video tape it. Well….maybe not that. I’ll keep plugging away until I think of a good one that doesn’t cause me bodily harm.

  2. totsymae1011 January 29, 2012 at 6:18 PM #

    A firm hand is the best hand. She’ll appreciate it later. Parents, too often, negotiate nowadays and it blurs the lines of parenting.

    • lorrelee1970 January 29, 2012 at 6:28 PM #

      She’s the only girl so her dad(s) let her get away with a lot. I think she was in shock when I did this.

  3. valentinelogar January 29, 2012 at 6:27 PM #

    Love this!

    I once took the door off of my sons bedroom. Obviously for a different reason (trust). He whined for days then finally said……”I need my privacy”

    My reply “anything you need privacy for can be accomplished in five minutes in the bathroom, including showering. If you take longer I will remove that door as well.”

    Tough love indeed. But sometimes required.

    • lorrelee1970 January 29, 2012 at 7:30 PM #

      I love that story. Good for you. I’ll have to use that line one day. We’ve taken my son’s door off here before as well.

      They don’t seem to realize that it’s their fault it got that far. Oh well….

  4. Androgoth January 29, 2012 at 7:03 PM #

    A very good lesson me thinks? :) I will be reading all of your
    transported goodies as soon as I get the opportunity so keep
    adding all the time and I will be calling in to read them :)

    Have a great rest of evening Lorre :)

    Androgoth XXx

    • lorrelee1970 January 29, 2012 at 7:48 PM #

      I need to stop by your site too, if there is anything left after you did some deletions, or so I read.

      Hopefully, the lesson will work and that room will be clean very soon.

      • Androgoth January 29, 2012 at 8:00 PM #

        There isn’t a lot left but I am adding again
        and so hopefully you will find something in
        the mix to whet your appetite :) I hope so :)

        Be good, but never too good okay? ;)

        Androgoth XXx

      • lorrelee1970 January 29, 2012 at 8:05 PM #

        No worries there.

        Well good. I need something to look at on your site besides the lady with her top coming off. Not that she isn’t hot, but I’m a chick, so…………………

      • Androgoth January 29, 2012 at 8:24 PM #

        You need to go to the 29th of October to find something that you might like on my Space just click through the calendar until you hit October (its on the left of my Space in the side bar) then click the 29th and there you have a chick pic :)

        Have fun reading it, or should I say viewing it? ;)

        Androgoth XXx

      • lorrelee1970 January 29, 2012 at 8:28 PM #

        Okay. I stopped by when the kids stepped out of the room. Something for the ladies indeed. I’m glad my hubby wasn’t in the room. He may start to question what I’m actually looking at on the internet.

  5. El Guapo January 29, 2012 at 7:07 PM #

    Great haiku.
    Good luck with the struggle!

    • lorrelee1970 January 29, 2012 at 7:49 PM #

      Thanks so much. It’s a struggle indeed.

  6. Sunshine January 29, 2012 at 7:29 PM #

    Well done all the way around! :) Good to see some parents who control the home and not the other way around!

    • lorrelee1970 January 29, 2012 at 7:50 PM #

      They would if they could and boy, do they try.

  7. jakesprinter January 29, 2012 at 7:48 PM #

    Great entry for this week theme my friend :)
    http://wp.me/1Dwwo

    • lorrelee1970 January 29, 2012 at 7:51 PM #

      Thanks so much. I’m glad you liked the combination I put together.

      • jakesprinter January 29, 2012 at 7:55 PM #

        Yes, You done a great work there my friend :)

  8. Jim Miller January 29, 2012 at 8:02 PM #

    I once removed the bedroom door from my ‘ex’ stepdaughter’s room because she always slammed it..
    That worked pretty good..

    • lorrelee1970 January 29, 2012 at 8:07 PM #

      That would definately get rid of the slamming door problem. Thanks for stopping by the site.

  9. Aurora, HSP January 29, 2012 at 9:29 PM #

    Killing me funny with your haiku! :) :) :) That would make me clean pronto. Love, love, love, my cozy, comfy bed. GFY for sticking to your word. That really matters in this world of slippery goal posts.

    • lorrelee1970 January 29, 2012 at 10:23 PM #

      Tis true. She asked her brother if she could sleep on his floor tonight because I said no when she asked to share my bed. Poor little girl.

  10. Arindam January 29, 2012 at 10:02 PM #

    Nice post. Great Haiku. :)

  11. Red January 29, 2012 at 10:12 PM #

    I need to borrow the bulldozer.
    Red.

    • lorrelee1970 January 29, 2012 at 10:26 PM #

      I needed one the first round with her. I especially loved finding the two bags of open chips that had been under her bed for how long…..who knows. Finding two mice in my house this weekend didn’t add to my joy for her.

      • Red February 1, 2012 at 10:36 PM #

        I completely sympathize. Mine is the daily search for apple cores. I still have to ask…who bought all this crap? Followed shortly by, WTF was I thinking?

  12. christyb January 30, 2012 at 10:24 AM #

    Hehe Well now she believes you when you say you mean business! Now I suppose I should clean my own bedroom…

    • lorrelee1970 January 30, 2012 at 8:17 PM #

      Yes. I’d hate to some to your house and take your bed away.

  13. Patti Kuche January 30, 2012 at 11:53 AM #

    At least this should make the cleaning process so much easier. For your daughter! My son once left his breakfast dishes on the table before going to school rather than bother stacking them in the dishwasher. I put them on his bed, which was a huge effort on my part if only because his room was so much further away than the dishwasher. . . He was shocked when he came home from school that they were there. I explained to him that “the maid” didn’t come by today. But, he said, we don’t have a maid . . . .
    I thought toddlers were hard work. Good luck!

    • lorrelee1970 January 30, 2012 at 8:19 PM #

      That is a great idea. I actually did that myself in college. My roomie was supposed to do the dishes and just kept forgetting. SO…..I put them all on her bed as well. She was a little pissed off to say the least, but she did wash them.

      She got me back though. During spring break someone broke into our apartment and only stole stuff from me. Hmmmmm.

  14. betweenyesterdayandtoday January 30, 2012 at 10:48 PM #

    Great post and an awesome idea..I can’t wait to try it out on my son, which I am sure will be any day now..

    • lorrelee1970 January 31, 2012 at 12:22 PM #

      She’s not as fast moving as I’d expect, but she’s been off of school, so sleeping on the couch has been like a treat for here. I don’t think it will be as much fun tonight with a set bedtime and the t.v. off.

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